2. I had very little feedback on my last post, but the only thing I noticed that was important from that was to again add more convincing points and facts to persuade the investors to invest and to like my service. I did my best to be more persuasive and as far as other comments, there wasn't much so that is all I changed.
3. I definitely felt more comfortable in front of the camera this time more than the others. I wasn't able to dress nicely as I am home this weekend and did not have my suit with me, but I felt that this was my most persuasive pitch yet. Like I said before, most of the feedback was just comments saying I did well, but I was advised to add more facts and persuasive points, and I did my best to add those things in.
3. I definitely felt more comfortable in front of the camera this time more than the others. I wasn't able to dress nicely as I am home this weekend and did not have my suit with me, but I felt that this was my most persuasive pitch yet. Like I said before, most of the feedback was just comments saying I did well, but I was advised to add more facts and persuasive points, and I did my best to add those things in.
Hi John,
ReplyDeleteThe elevator pitch for the most part is very good. Some minor things I would change would be to add more facts and numbers to help persuade Venture Capitalists to invest in your firm. Also, having stronger talking points and clear data helps too. Doing this along with practicing the elevator pitch, will ensure it's perfect. Keep up the good work.
Hey John,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a really great job on further improving your elevator pitch. You were able to take the comments and make effective changes in your presentation to perfect it. This elevator pitch has improved a lot upon your original elevator pitch as well as your second elevator pitch. With this pitch, I think you could really impress some investors.
Hey John, I think you did a great job on this post. I think you improved on this elevator pitch from the previous one. You seemed more confident and comfortable in front of the camera this time around. The only point I would have to make about your pitch is that you should try to sound more persuasive. This would help sell your business more effectively, but overall, great post.
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